Final Script

This is the final script for the main action which I took responsibility for TYPING UP while we both  worked together to improve what Ed initially constructed as a skeleton script. Just click on the link to visit the website to see the flip book which I created using a PDF version of the word document on which the script was written, and a software called 'Flipping Book'.

https://online.flippingbook.com/view/61045

Alternatively, you can read the script below if the link above does not function correctly:

*You must note, that the edits and cuts were not included as Ed and I still have yet to figure those out and when it comes to filming, it will rather be a question of what suits the actors role than any planned edit.*

‘KIN’

BY

EDWARD BARKER/ CSENGE NEMETI

FADE IN:

EXT. SIDINGS – DAY

Large, urban area with jarring imagery of nature and industrial, processed elements.

IVAN approaches the two hooded figures – TONY A and TONY B

IVAN

(Shifty and awkwardly laughs
in an attempt to make light of the
subject) Fancy seeing you two here

The characters experience an awkward silence here and thus IVAN moves on to explaining the character’s roles etc.

- INTERCUT TONY A BIO –

IVAN

TONY A likes killing people and
is essentially a hit
man, but rather the hit or miss
sort.

- CUT TO SIDINGS SCENE –

IVAN

So... I guess you work for me now?

TONY B

No, we worked for your dad. (Puts
 emphasis on ‘worked’) Except I don’t
know if you noticed, but your dad’s
not around anymore.

- INTERCUT TONY B BIO –

IVAN

TONY B, well he also likes to
kill, but there’s a difference
in the fact that he’s not trigger
happy.

- CUT TO SIDINGS SCENE –

IVAN

Well I figured, with dad gone...
I’m the new head?

TONY B

Well you figured wrong kid...

TONY A

(Interrupting TONY B)Just go back
home to that mum of yours.
(Both snigger and laugh at the
implied sexual innuendo)How is
she now a days anyway?

IVAN

(addressing TONY B)... What did
you call me here for TONY?

TONY B

This (throws mobile phone).

TONY A

He told us to give it to you
in case he was ever... busy.

TONY B

He said to check your voice-
mail.

TONY A

Run along kid.

- STRAIGHT CUT TO VOICEMAIL SCENE -